screwing up email marketing

“Followed advice from Vince for an email and now I have more leads in 1 hour than I did in the last 6 Months!”

This is an exact quote I pulled from the SPF Mastermind Facebook group from a gym owner in Chicago. 

The last update I got from her she had over 30 responses from one email about people interested in her personal training program.

The email was roughly 17 words long. 

I’m not going to give you the entire email (that stuff is reserved for clients of my Mastermind).

But I will give you the last line.

The last line was

Would you like to work with me?
Here’s where people mess up all the time.

They do not give clear instructions for what to do at the end of their emails.

The best ways to get responses are to ask questions or tell them exactly what to do. 

Another way we could have said this is.

Reply with YES for more info.

Most people don’t put a clear call to action and it’s the biggest reason why they stop emailing. 

They stop because they think no one is reading their stuff. 

If you don’t tell people what to do, you’ll get very few replies from your emails.

Vince Gabriele

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